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My heart rate is speeding,
I can feel myself shake,
My world no longer has meaning,
And this is for my own sake...

So I look over the verge,
at the leap I must make,
And I haven't got much choice...
This is the only option to take....

I get the nervous feeling,
Over what I must partake,
I plan to plunge to the depths,
Until my end comes...

...and I break.
This one isn't based on feelings, I just feel like creating a truly negative scene for a fictional character...
I used pretty simple words...
Nothing special imo.
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:iconjuustus:
Juustus Dec 12, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cliffhanger? :p
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:iconquilava08:
Quilava08 Dec 13, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I guess...
You need to have been at this point before to know the true meaning of it...
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:iconjuustus:
Juustus Dec 13, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm sure I have been in many cliff-hanging moments before... it gets really intense indeed. D:
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:iconopheleus:
Opheleus Dec 12, 2010  Student Digital Artist
o:
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Quilava08 Dec 12, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
truly inspiring words of wisdom thar.
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:iconopheleus:
Opheleus Dec 12, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Longest comment written.



























...Ever.
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:iconquilava08:
Quilava08 Dec 12, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
lame.
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:iconopheleus:
Opheleus Dec 12, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Like the saddo who keeps replying to me! :noes:
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:iconquilava08:
Quilava08 Dec 13, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
not really... It's my deviation D:<
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:iconopheleus:
Opheleus Dec 13, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Still doesn't change the fact that you're lame. :c
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